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”Dance with me my Darling” something I wrote in memory of the brave fire fighters of September 11th

15 Nov

when the hymn arises from the ashes

there you will be

haunting my everlasting love for you

that tune I will never forget

it’s the song I sing to you

 I dance to the rhythm of it

and call out your name

I feel your presence surrounding me

the birds chirp to the echo

of my feminine pitch

no longer am I singing alone

you chyme in as well

do you remember me

in the way that you left me

a decade ago

before the catastrophe occurred?

dance with me

tussle my hair

in between your abstract fingers

those heroic hands I do miss

when we finish the waltz

it is time for us to part

heaven beckons you

and your presence vanishes

you leave

but i remember

the farewell affection that you showed to me

”I love you darling..and I always will”

 
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Posted by on November 15, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

8 responses to “”Dance with me my Darling” something I wrote in memory of the brave fire fighters of September 11th

  1. wolfsrosebud's avatar

    wolfsrosebud

    November 15, 2011 at 8:55 pm

    lovely dedication

     
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      chanzibrenner

      November 16, 2011 at 12:10 am

      thank you check out my other poem that i posted!

       
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    Pat Hatt

    November 15, 2011 at 9:26 pm

    Wonderful tribute, truly greatly written verse.

     
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      chanzibrenner

      November 16, 2011 at 12:09 am

      thanx! check out ”frozen in time”

       
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    hedgewitch

    November 15, 2011 at 10:54 pm

    Very nice.

     
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      chanzibrenner

      November 16, 2011 at 12:08 am

      thank you! more work to come

       
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    brian miller

    November 16, 2011 at 12:38 am

    smiles…what a love to send you dancing…and that reassurance to know they love you still…nice verse…

     
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      chanzibrenner

      November 16, 2011 at 1:22 am

      Thank you!

       

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