two souls
one heart
your eyes meet mine
a shock of infinite connection blossoms
everything around us is just a haze
we are in a pool of ice
surrounded by drowning strangers
oblivious to the chaotic incident
that is occuring in this moment
when it is our turn to sink
into the freezing and onyx-like water
you lift me onto the platform
a selfless expression of love
two minutes became awareness
and tapping into each others souls
80 years of that vivid memory
so distant it will become
frozen in time
you are now in the depths
beneath reality
yes, you left me here
starving of your energy
from the electricity
that you empowerd me with
one moment
one stare
a glance into my essence
you unmasked me
i will forever be dismantled

brian miller
November 15, 2011 at 7:27 pm
wow. quite evocative…for a moment there this made me think of that scene in Titanice there at the end…well spun…saw your tweet for dverse…so are you linking in for openlinknight tonight? opens in about 30 minutes…
chanzibrenner
November 15, 2011 at 7:41 pm
hi thanx so much, you are actually my very first comment that i got on my blog..this is great..yes i thought of titanic after i read it..yes i want to link in to openlinknight do you know when it closes?
brian miller
November 15, 2011 at 7:53 pm
the new post will open at 3 pm EST…about 10 minutes from now…open link night has no theme so you can post anything you want and it is open for 33 hours…