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frozen in time

15 Nov

two souls

 

one heart

 

your eyes meet mine

 

a shock of infinite connection blossoms

 

 

everything around us is just a haze

 

we are in a pool of ice

 

surrounded by drowning strangers

 

oblivious to the chaotic incident

 

that is occuring in this moment

 

 

when it is our turn to sink

 

into the freezing and onyx-like water

 

you lift me onto the platform

 

a selfless expression of love

 

 

two minutes became awareness

 

and tapping into each others souls

 

80 years of that vivid memory

 

so distant it will become

 

frozen in time

 

 

you are now in the depths

 

beneath reality

 

yes, you left me here

 

starving of your energy

 

from the electricity

 

that you empowerd me with

 

 

one moment

 

one stare

 

a glance into my essence

 

you unmasked me

 

i will forever be dismantled

 

 
3 Comments

Posted by on November 15, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

3 responses to “frozen in time

  1. brian miller's avatar

    brian miller

    November 15, 2011 at 7:27 pm

    wow. quite evocative…for a moment there this made me think of that scene in Titanice there at the end…well spun…saw your tweet for dverse…so are you linking in for openlinknight tonight? opens in about 30 minutes…

     
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      chanzibrenner

      November 15, 2011 at 7:41 pm

      hi thanx so much, you are actually my very first comment that i got on my blog..this is great..yes i thought of titanic after i read it..yes i want to link in to openlinknight do you know when it closes?

       
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    brian miller

    November 15, 2011 at 7:53 pm

    the new post will open at 3 pm EST…about 10 minutes from now…open link night has no theme so you can post anything you want and it is open for 33 hours…

     

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