I was given a task to destroy them
The demon-like beings
That lurk in the shadows
Of the resting place of many
I asked bluntly to my authority
”Why am I chosen for this mission?”
He then looked through me with his piercing eyes
Behind his square shaped spectacles
He answered with a quiet chant
”The one who has risen
will be the one to slay
those that will rise”
I indeed have risen
Not from a casket
But from the fiery pit of Hell
The point lower than the core of Earth
I, the slayer, will meet my match
In a battle of good and evil
You see, I decided to live
While the parasite has chosen to kill the innocent
This was inspired by a dream I had about ”buffy the vampire slayer”. I found depth to it.
Amber is the Color of Her Energy 
Laurie Kolp
November 16, 2011 at 12:39 pm
What a dream you have transformed into a powerful poem!
chanzibrenner
November 17, 2011 at 12:01 am
thank you i feel honored by ur comment…i read that you are apart of a poetry association..i would love you to continue critiquing my work!
kez
November 16, 2011 at 1:11 pm
dark and menacing yet still good overcame evil ….thanks for sharing x
chanzibrenner
November 17, 2011 at 12:02 am
thanx and your welcome!
Shashi (@VerseEveryDay)
November 16, 2011 at 1:44 pm
Interesting thought… rising from the beyond the core of hell… and to rise and kill the evil.. I like the ring of fight over the evil…
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-where-you-will-go.html
chanzibrenner
November 17, 2011 at 12:02 am
thanx!
Yousei Hime
November 16, 2011 at 8:08 pm
Definitely interesting. I’m curious to see if you take the story further. I hope you do.
chanzibrenner
November 17, 2011 at 12:03 am
im not sure if i can..the message was already given over..but i will try..
gautami tripathy
November 17, 2011 at 3:07 pm
wonderful poem…
metamorphosis
Richy
November 18, 2011 at 6:21 am
this just makes me grin with the innocent of a devil. Great stuff
Poets Rally
November 20, 2011 at 1:04 am
very interesting story, well penned.
invite you to join poets rally today, best wishes.
🙂