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An Ocean of Dull Encounters

27 Sep

Its sailing away from me
drifting into the sea of life
where fish and mermaids
ponder their fate
and as the ravenous sharks
swim to seek them out

what once was thought to
be belonged to me
now is untangled
from the many ropes
that gripped onto
its stubborn build

it never wished to be here
in the place where strange love
is prevalent
no more will the ship
encounter such a fate
it leaves off on to its journey
where it wishes to experience
a more stimulating adventure

will it ever return
to the shore in where I reside?
I most certainly hope not
for whatever care I put into it
was disregarded
almost as if my efforts
were invisible

so long Voyager
best wishes for a smooth journey
to where dull encounters are in your favor

 
10 Comments

Posted by on September 27, 2012 in Uncategorized

 

10 responses to “An Ocean of Dull Encounters

  1. brian miller's avatar

    brian miller

    October 2, 2012 at 11:14 pm

    sometimes it is best just to let it go…esp if it wants to get away…and perhaps it will ifnd what it is looking for…or realize what it too has now lost…

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      October 2, 2012 at 11:18 pm

      i agree brian..sometimes the love that was once shared between two people becomes a part of them..its hard to let go of something that dwells within

       
  2. Heaven (@asweetlust)'s avatar

    Heaven (@asweetlust)

    October 3, 2012 at 1:32 am

    An intriguing title post ~ I do like the idea of sailing away to some new stimulating adventures ~

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      October 3, 2012 at 1:34 am

      thanx 🙂

       
  3. hobgoblin2011's avatar

    hobgoblin2011

    October 3, 2012 at 5:10 am

    nice write. I echo brian’s comment, it’s easier to let go sometimes…really like the quick reply you gave to yourself when questioning if it would return…can’t pinpoint the reason, but really like how that played out. thanks, nice read

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      October 3, 2012 at 7:10 am

      thanks for your input!

       
  4. darkangelwrites's avatar

    darkangelwrites

    October 3, 2012 at 6:09 am

    Loved how you kept using your water theme. Just reposted something in a similar vein. Relationships and sea are a perfect match as far as I’m concerned!

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      October 3, 2012 at 7:11 am

      yes…i agree..there will always be emotions ”resurfacing” from events 🙂

       
  5. ayala's avatar

    ayala

    October 4, 2012 at 1:00 am

    Nice capture. loved the water theme.

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      October 4, 2012 at 5:19 am

      thanx ayala

       

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