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”Unsealed with a Rightious Kiss”-inspired by last night’s dream

14 Sep

I’m thinking of a kiss

an unattainable one

your lips meet mine

through waves of energy

oh, how I wish

for even that one peck

pressed against my blushing cheek

I could have had it all

all I wanted was you though

to have

and to hold

from that day forward

I dreamed of you last night

you cried my name

I awoke with tears

flowing down

my pale face

I know why we parted

you pulled the trigger

to my fantasy life

the world that sets mine apart

from normalcy

we certainly cannot be

living together

in harmony

for what dwells beneath my surface

is a stormy soul

one that feeds off of the chase

where you failed to catch me

in my last regression

my warm lips remain untouched

they were waiting for yours

to meet them for the first time

yes, my pure kiss can exist

but you?

only in theory

 
15 Comments

Posted by on September 14, 2012 in Uncategorized

 

15 responses to “”Unsealed with a Rightious Kiss”-inspired by last night’s dream

  1. baronessannie's avatar

    chanzibrenner

    September 14, 2012 at 9:42 am

    sorry guys..i tried really hard to separate the stanzas..unfortunately wordpress was giving me a hard time :/

     
  2. brian miller's avatar

    brian miller

    September 15, 2012 at 11:40 pm

    sad….those breaks are hard when they are the one we are head over heals with…and we are left with our memories and fantasy….

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      September 16, 2012 at 4:37 am

      yes..and thank the Lord for fantasy

       
  3. Serena's avatar

    Serena

    September 16, 2012 at 2:48 am

    I know those kinds of dreams.. I know those kinds of unattainable kisses… oh I wish I didn’t know. You’ve captured bittersweet feelings so well. “you pulled the trigger /to my fantasy life” … I liked those lines especially…

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      September 16, 2012 at 4:37 am

      thank you!

       
  4. hobgoblin2011's avatar

    hobgoblin2011

    September 16, 2012 at 4:27 am

    lots of neat twists here, stylistically and subject-wise. Really nice job of illustrating emotional yearning here, and love the direction you chose for the prompt. Thanks

     
  5. baronessannie's avatar

    chanzibrenner

    September 16, 2012 at 4:38 am

    yea i didnt even realize it fit with the prompt-that wasn’t my intention!

     
  6. Ravenblack's avatar

    Ravenblack

    September 16, 2012 at 6:07 am

    Really heart wrenching to wake from a dream like that — wanting that relationship so much and knowing it will never be as one wishes. You captured the emotions in this one.

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      September 16, 2012 at 6:51 am

      yes..its tragic

       
  7. Sabio Lantz's avatar

    Sabio Lantz

    September 16, 2012 at 2:00 pm

    “only in theory” — nice

     
  8. baronessannie's avatar

    chanzibrenner

    September 16, 2012 at 9:36 pm

    thanx!

     
  9. Anna's avatar

    Anna Montgomery

    September 18, 2012 at 11:05 pm

    The yearning was palpable, nicely done!

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      September 20, 2012 at 8:53 am

      🙂

       
  10. ayala's avatar

    ayala

    September 19, 2012 at 2:54 am

    Nicely done .

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      September 20, 2012 at 8:54 am

      pleasure is all mine 🙂

       

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