dearest lover of the midnight sky
will you come dance with me?
until dawn breaks
as your face will soon fade
dearest lover of the dark
and eerie sea
will you sail with me?
in this world of harsh waves
dearest lover of the rich forest
must you be so mysterious?
i hear your footsteps pacing
though you are no where in sight
to my lover of the arctic circle
why are you so callous?
warm your heart up to me
defrost your cold exterior
and to my true love
will you waltz with me?
and accompany me on the journey of life?
please don’t hide yourself
hold a flame to your soul
and let it kindle yours and mine
for if then, my lovers will have lost
and you and I will become
us
Amber is the Color of Her Energy 
chanzibrenner
November 30, 2011 at 11:33 pm
the last stanza encompasses all of the lovers’ of lust’s traits!
The Cello Strings
December 1, 2011 at 12:27 am
beautiful discussions in terms of love between you and your lover.
a fun read.
chanzibrenner
December 1, 2011 at 12:43 am
thanx!
brian miller
December 1, 2011 at 12:39 am
i like the symbolism of the flame at the end there…and once you find the one that kindles your soul all other lovers pale in comparison…smiles.
chanzibrenner
December 1, 2011 at 12:43 am
thanx for your kind words…i always look forward to ur comments!
amivglobus
December 1, 2011 at 1:26 am
Beautiful. I hope you dance.
chanzibrenner
December 1, 2011 at 3:53 am
thanx me too!
The Noiseless Cuckooclock
December 1, 2011 at 3:23 pm
a brilliant ending,
beautiful.
chanzibrenner
December 2, 2011 at 2:25 am
thank you so much meens alot
claudia
December 1, 2011 at 8:43 pm
ah i sighed at giving up the mysterious forest lover…but when that one and only appears..it may be an easy thing…smiles
chanzibrenner
December 2, 2011 at 2:25 am
amen to that
Gay Reiser Cannon
December 1, 2011 at 11:03 pm
Yes lots of fantasy in play here. I am with Claudia, liked the layering implied in the mysterious forest lover – many places to hide there. This seemed to be a reverie of longing – waiting for the right “one” to come along.
chanzibrenner
December 2, 2011 at 2:24 am
yes currently I am in the ”dating stage”…this came to mind 🙂
zongrik
December 1, 2011 at 11:32 pm
you sure have a lot of lovers!!!
chanzibrenner
December 2, 2011 at 2:23 am
😉
Beth Winter
December 2, 2011 at 12:40 am
lol at zongrik’s comment!
Each plea is gorgeous and sings of love.
chanzibrenner
December 2, 2011 at 2:23 am
thanx so much!
shail
December 2, 2011 at 7:25 am
I liked the imagination you have expressed here.
chanzibrenner
December 2, 2011 at 7:50 am
thank you, i do have an imaginative mind..or so im told 🙂
The Orange Tree
December 2, 2011 at 4:18 pm
this is fun.
Happy Rally.
😉
bajanpoet
December 2, 2011 at 8:13 pm
Loved this read 🙂
My favourite was the last stanza
hold a flame to your soul
and let it kindle yours and mine
for if then, my lovers will have lost
and you and I will become
us
chanzibrenner
December 2, 2011 at 8:41 pm
thanx! yes i think the last stanza is the best part!
Heaven
December 3, 2011 at 2:42 pm
Iike the nature themes in this lover’s lust…. the last lines are full of hope
nice to meet you ~
http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2011/12/unmeasurable.html
Other Mary
December 3, 2011 at 11:37 pm
I like each lover in their place, with their different qualities, until you found just the right one. (and I also had to laugh at zonkgirk’s comment)
chanzibrenner
December 4, 2011 at 7:04 am
lol yes zonkgirk is funny..but no..i do not have alot of lover..sadly i havent found ”mr. right” yet..but getting there
naramalone
December 3, 2011 at 11:52 pm
Lovely nature elements to this and I especially liked the flame kindling their souls at the end.
chanzibrenner
December 4, 2011 at 7:02 am
yes tis romantic
Life: Between the lines
December 4, 2011 at 12:22 am
what a sweet call, to above and below, best the heart 🙂
enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/02/faces-and-shadows/
chanzibrenner
December 4, 2011 at 7:02 am
thank you~!
zongrik
December 7, 2011 at 4:25 pm
you and i will become us -> what we all long for in side, more than anything else
chanzibrenner
December 8, 2011 at 6:23 am
yep greatest gift to become one with someone you love
Chevrefeuille
December 8, 2011 at 8:11 am
Life is almost every day a dance worth. Dance through life … Thanks for sharing.
chanzibrenner
December 8, 2011 at 8:22 am
no prob and thank YOU for reading it 🙂