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”And He calls it Fate”

22 Nov

This is a poem i wrote about the fascinating story of the Bible about Adam and Eve. This is how I like to imagine how they were 🙂

 

it wasn’t a descent

nor a Birth

i was formed

his rib became mine

 

he calls me Eve

i call him Adam

no human besides us

in this ”world”?

 

we don’t converse

he stands from afar

gazing at me with his big black eyes

his lips curve to an unknown expression

 

two confused souls

stranded here in Eden

there is only one thing standing between us

The Tree that will start the tragedy of our epic romance

 

he comes closer

our souls longing to merge together

clearly i am the positive to his negative

i am the only voice he will want to receive

 

we become companions

we then begin to communicate in our unique language

using whatever noises comes out of our vocals

we control our hand movements to sign language

 

the weather is pleasant

the wind makes The Tree ever so beautiful

the temptation becomes stronger

he longs to give into his desire

 

i never meant for it to happen

everything would have been Perfect if it wasn’t for this incident

the fault was mine

the Sin was his

 

my soul mate transgressed

the first man to ever have done so

i am not ashamed

i love him despite his flaws

 

we are banned from the garden

The Tree isn’t between us anymore

now we are in the black shadows

the sword of fire is blocking Eden’s entrance

 

everything has changed

soon Adam will fade

Death will come into the picture

Evil now has the power to prevail

 

Indeed this is a romantic tragedy

but it was His intention

for without Evil

where is Good?

 
5 Comments

Posted by on November 22, 2011 in romance

 

5 responses to “”And He calls it Fate”

  1. brian miller's avatar

    brian miller

    November 22, 2011 at 9:16 pm

    hmm…interesting if it was his intention…i dunno hard to ponder that, but then i guess free will is his choice…rather fascinating to think though of life prior to the fall in intimacy with God and each other you know…

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      November 23, 2011 at 4:36 am

      when i said ”His” it was capitalized because i was talking about Gd

       
  2. Shashi (@VerseEveryDay)'s avatar

    Shashi (@VerseEveryDay)

    November 23, 2011 at 3:29 pm

    Its a good one thought on the ancient biblical story.. i enjoyed it … Liked your beautiful lines…

    ‘we are banned from the garden
    The Tree isn’t between us anymore
    now we are in the black shadows
    the sword of fire is blocking Eden’s entrance’

    Thanks for sharing..

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-sighs.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      November 24, 2011 at 1:42 am

      thank you!

       
  3. Poets Rally's avatar

    Poets Rally

    December 1, 2011 at 8:13 pm

    amazing expressions.

    Hello,
    How is your day?

    Glad to land here,
    Amazing poetic muses shared,
    Smiles.

    Welcome joining us for poets rally week 57,
    A random poem or a free verse is okay.
    Hope to see you in.

    Happy Thursday.
    xoxox

     

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