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“6 Feet Down Under”

21 Aug

Even when you are

6 feet down under

I will find you there

staring at my skeletal frame

and into my hallow sockets

You will ask me

”why did it take you this long?”

I will ask you

”Is this really where we belong?”

up in heaven will be our place

where you and I will embrace

our immortality and new race

and all the questions we will have to face

and there we will be

rejoicing with our ancestry

realizing that our bodies are like new

and all I will want to do

is just gaze at you

 
18 Comments

Posted by on August 21, 2012 in Uncategorized

 

18 responses to ““6 Feet Down Under”

  1. Claudia's avatar

    Claudia

    August 21, 2012 at 8:11 pm

    this is when love doesn’t die.. beautifully penned

     
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      chanzibrenner

      August 21, 2012 at 8:12 pm

      thank you!

       
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    Heaven (@asweetlust)

    August 21, 2012 at 8:19 pm

    Lovely thoughts…thanks for sharing them ~

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      August 21, 2012 at 9:42 pm

      you are very welcome!

       
  3. brian miller's avatar

    brian miller

    August 21, 2012 at 9:31 pm

    smiles…eternal love….even the grave can not stop it…i like that thought much…smiles…nice spin…

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      August 21, 2012 at 9:32 pm

      thanx brian!

       
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    Pat Hatt

    August 22, 2012 at 12:34 am

    Even beyond the grave such a love can still enslave, nicely done.

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      August 22, 2012 at 12:35 am

      thank you so much!

       
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    Semaphore / Samuel Peralta

    August 22, 2012 at 2:27 am

    What a twist! Immediately after reading, I thought of Romeo and Juliet, that this was the coda to their tragic scene, what happens after the curtain drops.

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      August 22, 2012 at 2:40 am

      thank you so much samuel!! wow romeo and juliet-havent thought about that!

       
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    Daydreamertoo

    August 22, 2012 at 10:48 am

    This is proof that true love never dies and is eternal. Lovely!

     
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      chanzibrenner

      August 22, 2012 at 10:50 am

      i completely agree!

       
  7. ayala's avatar

    ayala

    August 22, 2012 at 12:08 pm

    Love lives on forever…beautiful!

     
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      chanzibrenner

      August 23, 2012 at 2:49 am

      it sure does!

       
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    Mary

    August 22, 2012 at 1:17 pm

    Yes, I agree with the other comments. Love will live on beyond this earthly life! Nice write here.

     
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      chanzibrenner

      August 23, 2012 at 2:49 am

      thank you Mary!

       
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    wolfsrosebud

    August 23, 2012 at 2:21 pm

    nice way of taking a heavy topic and making it light

     
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    Audrey Howitt

    August 29, 2012 at 11:38 pm

    Lovely read! I agree with all the above!

     

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