Even when you are
6 feet down under
I will find you there
staring at my skeletal frame
and into my hallow sockets
You will ask me
”why did it take you this long?”
I will ask you
”Is this really where we belong?”
up in heaven will be our place
where you and I will embrace
our immortality and new race
and all the questions we will have to face
and there we will be
rejoicing with our ancestry
realizing that our bodies are like new
and all I will want to do
is just gaze at you

Claudia
August 21, 2012 at 8:11 pm
this is when love doesn’t die.. beautifully penned
chanzibrenner
August 21, 2012 at 8:12 pm
thank you!
Heaven (@asweetlust)
August 21, 2012 at 8:19 pm
Lovely thoughts…thanks for sharing them ~
chanzibrenner
August 21, 2012 at 9:42 pm
you are very welcome!
brian miller
August 21, 2012 at 9:31 pm
smiles…eternal love….even the grave can not stop it…i like that thought much…smiles…nice spin…
chanzibrenner
August 21, 2012 at 9:32 pm
thanx brian!
Pat Hatt
August 22, 2012 at 12:34 am
Even beyond the grave such a love can still enslave, nicely done.
chanzibrenner
August 22, 2012 at 12:35 am
thank you so much!
Semaphore / Samuel Peralta
August 22, 2012 at 2:27 am
What a twist! Immediately after reading, I thought of Romeo and Juliet, that this was the coda to their tragic scene, what happens after the curtain drops.
chanzibrenner
August 22, 2012 at 2:40 am
thank you so much samuel!! wow romeo and juliet-havent thought about that!
Daydreamertoo
August 22, 2012 at 10:48 am
This is proof that true love never dies and is eternal. Lovely!
chanzibrenner
August 22, 2012 at 10:50 am
i completely agree!
ayala
August 22, 2012 at 12:08 pm
Love lives on forever…beautiful!
chanzibrenner
August 23, 2012 at 2:49 am
it sure does!
Mary
August 22, 2012 at 1:17 pm
Yes, I agree with the other comments. Love will live on beyond this earthly life! Nice write here.
chanzibrenner
August 23, 2012 at 2:49 am
thank you Mary!
wolfsrosebud
August 23, 2012 at 2:21 pm
nice way of taking a heavy topic and making it light
Audrey Howitt
August 29, 2012 at 11:38 pm
Lovely read! I agree with all the above!