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A Conservative Goth

11 Dec

An illusion am I not?

An exterior of complacency

Naivety

And conservativeness

 

Two sided coins

Flip them and dumbfounded you will be

Saints on the outside

Sinners faced down

 

Righteous in appearance

Yet secretly takes pleasure in his harlot

He helps the less fortunate with their struggles

While smiling on the inside at what awaits him

At the corner inn

 

Words of prayer uttered by her dry lips

Out of love for Him they most certainly are not

Good deeds she partakes in everyday

Yet inside secretly plans to meet with

Her forbidden lover

 

A façade am I not?

An interior of discontent

Knowledge as vast as the sandy deserts

And as Gothic as any punk on Melrose Ave.

This poem was written out of pure discontent at what I observe of some people’s behavior and their lack of honesty.

*Melrose Avenue is a strip in L.A. that is known for Gothic/Emo/punk hangouts..it kinda brushed off on me…

 
5 Comments

Posted by on December 11, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

5 responses to “A Conservative Goth

  1. brian miller's avatar

    brian miller

    December 13, 2011 at 11:09 pm

    live in conservative mecca…over 60% christian population…and its not much different than anywhere else as much as they want you to think with all the spiritual make up…

     
  2. aurinth's avatar

    Chris G.

    December 13, 2011 at 11:14 pm

    Breaking all the conventions…it is indeed amusing to see when people do step outside the preconceived notions of a “group” – and utterly disappointing to see the resulting scowls and criticism from other members of the same. Individuality should make the world go round, after all…

     
    • baronessannie's avatar

      chanzibrenner

      December 13, 2011 at 11:24 pm

      yep the singer ”matisyahu’ who is jewish orthodox shaved off his beard and it is a huge deal in the religious community (wich im part of)…sad

       
  3. poets rally's avatar

    poets rally

    December 31, 2011 at 3:50 am

    amazing poem,

    Hello,

    Hope all is well,
    Glad to land on your island that showcase fabulous poetry talent, way to go!!!

    Welcome join us by submitting a free verse or a poem of your choice today,

    Cheers.

    Happy New Year!
    Bless You.

    xoxox

     
  4. David Eric Cummins's avatar

    David Eric Cummins

    August 12, 2012 at 1:10 pm

    I absolutely love this! Fantastic!

     

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