”Ora”
where do I belong?
on this Earth of water and land
this universe of pain
and various emotions
Ora is so much more appealing
to my kind
to the lost souls
of Earth
here lies physicality
G-d is concealed in stone
evil is disguised in so called kindness
and then there is selfish love
in Ora the concept of modesty has no need
for existing
a body doesn’t mask me
I just am…
the sun does not set there
or rise
a galaxy of stars provide light
there is no darkness
Death is unheard of
there is infinite life on Ora
the planet of virtue
and peace
war is silent there in that atmosphere
Ora is under rule of one King
He has not failed me once
his actions rests in my trust
Earth is quite a distance away
from my safe haven of true beauty
my paradise
which is far away concealed in a ray of colors
“is it worth it”?
I ask Earthlings
should i stay and restore order here
to help bring out the essence of Him?
they say “yes”
I am needed
with a simple word uttered
I have the power to draw light out from the adamant
Amber is the Color of Her Energy 
brian miller
December 3, 2011 at 11:35 pm
nice…really enjoyed your story telling in this…i am not familiar with the story line but i am fascinated…
is this the one you intended to link at dverse…you linked the one you used on tuesday…
chanzibrenner
December 4, 2011 at 7:10 am
oh woops i didnt realize…thats odd i thought i just linked my whole blog to it..im happy that you are fascinated..it gives me such pleasure in knowing that people get enjoyment out of my writing..the storyline is not real..there is no planet ora..the concept is though..its sorta like kabbalah in judiasim when one makes a blessing on food the infinite light is that is concealed inside of becomes part of this world…there is a shell called ”klipa”..once klipa is removed from the esscence (gd) this world is a more holistic place 🙂 thus the planet ora is where gd is and his essence is not concealed in anything..it just is…
brian miller
December 4, 2011 at 12:38 pm
it was linked to the one from OLN, i had gone back and changed it to the whole blog just in case…thanks for the further enlightenment as well…
chanzibrenner
December 4, 2011 at 6:55 pm
oh thank you..appreciate it..what is OLN?
Rosemary Nissen-Wade
December 4, 2011 at 12:14 am
Interesting take on the prompt. What a fabulous last line! Id love that super power. 🙂
chanzibrenner
December 4, 2011 at 7:12 am
thanx..how interesting i didnt even realize when posting this that it fits this week’s promt! wow that is amazing…divine providence indeed..smiles
Mary
December 4, 2011 at 12:17 am
Ora sounds like a wonderful super hero! Enjoyed this.
chanzibrenner
December 4, 2011 at 7:10 am
ora is actually a planet..smiles
claudia
December 4, 2011 at 8:36 am
ora sounds like a cool planet and it seems we earthlings could learn a lot from this king..
chanzibrenner
December 4, 2011 at 8:52 am
thanx..yes I currently do learn alot form this King…(GD) 🙂
David King
December 4, 2011 at 9:16 am
Yup, but when you’ve sorted out ora come back to earth and sort it out – please! Great write.
chanzibrenner
December 4, 2011 at 11:03 am
thanx…will do..i shall work on it 🙂
Heaven
December 4, 2011 at 1:25 pm
An ideal place it is.. the one place we seek in our life here on earth…but alas, it is a challenge to move from where we are, to the place that we “dream” of ~
Very creative ~